- The Life of Muhammad: A Critique of Guillaume’s English Translation
- Moinul Haq’s Translation of Ibn Sa’d’s Kitab al-Tabaqat al-Kabir
Dr. ‘Abdul Latif Tibawi
Professor Guillaume is not merely offering a translation of the received text of the biography of Muhammad, as recorded by Ibn Hisham from al-Bakka’i, from Ibn Ishaq. His work is a translation of his own reconstruction of Ibn Ishaq ….
… one gathers from the concluding words on page v that the translator hopes that his translation will ‘help to further cooperation and friendliness between my country and the Islamic world.’ This is an aim which is, of course, more expedient than academic, but it is nevertheless a commendable one, formulated as it is by a student of Islam who is at the same time an Anglican clergyman. It is difficult, however, to see how a profane transformation of the received text of the life of Muhammad such as is attempted by Professor Guillaume is likely to commend itself to the Islamic world.
It seems, on preliminary examination, that a translation of the Sirah into English is not required; but since nevertheless one has now been produced by a well-known writer, it is necessary to give it all the attention it deserves. The reviewer (and the reader) who is in a hurry need have no qualms: the translator has an established reputation; the book is well produced and has the imprimatur of a famous publishing house. But if he has time for close examination, comparison and check, he will find that this translation raises more problems than it solves.
‘It has been my aim,’ he says, ‘to restore so far as is now possible the text of Ibn Ishaq as it left his pen or as he dictated it to his hearers from excerpts in later texts’ (p. xxx). But has this aim been realized? How much in actual fact did the reconstruction text gain from these excerpts? Has Ibn Hisham’s text – indeed, has that of Ibn Ishaq – lost anything in the process? Professor Guillaume’s method is haphazard and far from being inclusive. It involves certain vital rearrangement, omissions, abbreviations, and additions for which little or no reason is given …
In the process of separating Ibn Ishaq’s supposed text from that of Ibn Hisham, and the accompanying process of rearrangement, omission, abbreviations, and additions, the style has also been changed. Thus the dialogue was much shortened in many cases, direct speech was often changed into indirect speech, and change of person is also frequent. As a result, the English translation has many instances of confusion, obscurity, and misunderstandings. This is aggravated by the ill effects of certain subtle twists of vital matters in the life of Muhammad, as will be pointed out …..
Below are considered sections chosen from all parts of Professor Guillaume’s translation, and certain shortcomings are pointed out in comparison with the Arabic original … Some of the instances pointed below are small inaccuracies which may be pardoned. They are noted only for their cumulative effect together with the really serious mistakes which alter or distort the original. The first section so chosen (pp. 14-16) is on ‘The Beginning of Christianity in Najran,’ preceded by a paragraph on the reign of Dhu Nuwas. Here آخر ملوك حمير is translated as ‘the last of Yamani Kings,’ and واراه, which in this context clearly refers to Faymiyun, and not to both him and his admirer Salih, is translated as ‘they buried him,’ which should be ‘he buried him.’ Of the other minor inaccuracies two more may be mentioned. For the phrase في بعض الشام ‘somewhere in Syria’ Professor Guillaume has ‘through Syria’; for بعض أرض العرب he has ‘the land of the Arabs’; and for سيارة من العرب he has simply ‘a caravan.’ The context in both cases suggests ‘bedouin’ rather than ‘Arab.’ [See p. 89 of translation, where the word أعرابي is wrongly translated as ‘an Arab’; the correct translation in the context is ‘bedouin.’] ….
But more serious than these lapses is some tampering with the original Arabic to an extent which diminishes or alters its meaning. Thus for وبنجران بقايا من أهل دين عيسى بن مريم Professor Guillaume has ‘In Najran there are some people who held the religion of Isa b. Maryam.’ Certainly the second word in this phrase is a crucial one, and there is no warrant for its omission. The footnote explaining that the phrase means literally ‘remnants of the people of ‘Isa’s religion’ will not do, for that is the only meaning. Later in the same passage أن رجلا من بقايا أهل ذلك الدين was rendered simply by ‘a Christian,’ again omitting the same crucial word, but this time without even an explanation. The same phrase occurs a third time and is again omitted without an apology. The significance of this word is more than linguistic; for the historian it conveys a picture of Najran peculiar to the age of Ibn Ishaq and Ibn Hisham, and its omission is a real loss ….
The section on ‘The Apostle Receives the Order to Fight’ (pp. 212-213) is not among the easy parts of the Sira to translate, but because of its obvious importance special care should have been taken to translate exactly and to omit nothing. It is certainly more faithful to translate بيعة العقبة as the ‘pledge of Aqaba,’ since nothing is gained by the omission of the first word, and some clarity is lost. But there is more serious omission of twelve words of special importance. ‘The first verse which was sent down on this subject ….’ reads Professor Guillaume’s translation. The last three words, ‘on this subject,’ are taken as substitute for the following; في إذنه له في الحرب، .وإحلاله له الدماء والقتال، لمن بغى عليهم. Thus the full passage should read as follows: ‘The first verse which was revealed … allowing him (i.e. Muhammad) go wage war, and making it lawful for him to shed blood, and fighting those who oppressed him and his companions.’ Without this explanatory passage the significance of the verse itself may be missed ….
Inaccuracies are to be fund on almost every page in this translation. Thus when we turn to the section on ‘The Affair of the B. Qaynuqa‘’ (pp. 363-64) we find that the word ‘affair’ is used correctly for the Arabic amr … But Professor Guillaume has also ‘attack’ in the table of contents. If the change was necessary why not use muḥāṣara ‘siege’, which is more accurate than ‘attack’? The next two examples are more serious. First, how did Professor Guillaume persuade himself to omit the polite opening ya ma‘shar from Muhammad’s address to the Jews? Secondly, why the words ‘and they were the allies of the Khazraj’ – which are Ibn Ishaq’s and not an explanation from the translator – are bracketed in such a way as to leave the matter in doubt? But even more serious injustice has been done to Ibn Ishaq by one who set out to restore the text. Ibn Ishaq says ‘‘Asim b. ‘Umar b. Qatada related to me that …’ = حدثني عاصم بن عمر بن قتادة. In Professor Guillaume’s English this becomes ‘‘Asim … said that ….’
Similarly the Arabic for ‘The raid on B. Qurayza’ (pp.461-463) has ghazwa which is correctly translated as ‘raid,’ but the table of contents has ‘attack’ ….
But the worst mistake is his translation of the word jahūla which occurs in the retort of the Jews of Qurayza to Muhammad’s challenge. ‘Has God disgraced you and brought His vengeance upon you?’ The Jews replied defiantly but respectfully: ‘O Abu’l Qasim, you are not ignorant (i.e. whether He has or not?)’ = ما كنت جهولا. To translate the last word as ‘a barbarous person’ is both mistaken and ill-advised. Jahl here is clearly the opposite of ‘ilm in the sense of knowledge or information. The Jewish retort may thus be paraphrased as: ‘You know that God has neither disgraced us not brought His vengeance upon us’ ….
Professor Guillaume’s rendering ‘Thaqif has surrendered’ in the first sentence on the section on ‘The Year of the Deputations’ (pp.627-31) is at variance with the text, which has aslamat Thaqif = ‘embraced Islam.’ So is his rendering ‘he (i.e. Muhammad) subdued it (i.e. Quraysh) to Islam,’ which should be ‘and it was subdued by Islam’ = ودوخها الإسلام ….
[It] is in the translation of Muhammad’s sermon itself that the more serious mistakes are to be found. It is not adequate to translate ايها الناس by ‘O men!’ when the words were addressed to men and women pilgrims … It is a great pity that Professor Guillaume saw fit to cut out these two words recurring in the body of the sermon, as he cut out amma ba‘du, thus depriving the original of much of its oratorical character ….
On the very first page of the translation there is a footnote to this expression: ‘… according to what they allege, but God knows best.’ The footnote reads: ‘The phrase employed indicates that the writer doubts the statement. There is a saying in Arabic: There is euphemism for everything and the polite way of saying “it is a lie” is “they allege” (za‘amu).’ The use of this and other expressions is discussed in the Introduction (pp. xix-xxi) with an aim similar to that conveyed in by the footnote.
There are accepted rules for weighing evidence in writing history. As Professor Guillaume has here used only part of the evidence and strained it to the extreme, it is worth while to examine the meaning of za‘ama, first in general and then in its particular uses in the Sira.
The basic entry in the dictionary under the za‘ama is ‘ … said; and it is said of the report which may be right or wrong.’ At least four principal uses of the word are given. It may mean ‘he said or reported’; or ‘he thought’; or ‘he promised’; or ‘he guaranteed.’ But there is an important commentary which seems to be the key to a correct understanding of the use of the term in the Sira. Here is a rough translation of it: ‘Za‘ama is used in relating a tradition that lacks a chain of transmitters and is conveyed verbally as a report.’ Almost all that is preceded by the phrase or its derivations in the Sira, as well as similar expressions like fi ma balaghani and fi ma dhukira li are of this category of traditions, which were accepted, related, and passed often followed by the formula, wallahu a‘lam. This is obviously pious caution, not outright doubt or rejection of the report, still less an indication that it is a lie ….
Perhaps the worst mistranslation of the term is that on p. 183, where Ibn Ishaq, quoting al-Zuhri, who was reporting Sa’id b. Musayyam tells of Muhammad’s ascent into heaven. The expression used by Ibn Ishaq is za‘ama al-Zuhri وزعم الزهري عن سعيد بن المسيب which means in this context ‘al-Zuhri said on the authority of Sa’id b. Musayyab.’ Professor Guillaume translated ‘al-Zuhri alleged as from Sa’id …’ In the footnote he dogmatically states that ‘the verb implies grave doubt as to the speaker’s veracity.’ In the Introduction (p. xx) we are told that this term must have been used deliberately by Ibn Ishaq instead of haddathani as a warning against the authenticity of the report. The reason given for this assumption is that al-Zuhri and Ibn Ishaq knew each other well and must have met quite often.’ But what if za‘ama here means nothing more than ‘he said,’ without giving chain of transmitters? Clearly Professor Guillaume’s guess is no convincing argument to prove the contrary.
It now remains to consider a few isolated matters.
(a) The Arabic word ‘Allah’, although used in pre-Islamic times acquired in English a distinctly Muslim connotation and association. In translating an historic book such as the Sira, care should be taken not to confuse its pre-Islamic meaning with its new meaning. In Professor Guillaume’s translation there is little evidence to indicate that a clear distinction is made and consistently followed. In the sections dealing with pre-Islamic as well as in those dealing with Islamic times the word is sometimes rendered as ‘God’ and sometimes as ‘Allah.’ It seems that it would have been better to use the first for the pagan period, and the second for the period following Muhammad’s call ….
(b) Professor Guillaume’s translation of the Arabic rasul or Rasul Allah is ‘apostle’ or ‘the apostle.’ Although used by early translators of the Qur’an, this term is objectionable. A preferable translation is ‘Messenger’ or ‘Messenger of God,’ … The main objection to ‘apostle’ is that it is difficult to isolate it from its Christian association. Indeed this difficulty is staring us in the face on p. 104 of Professor Guillaume’s translation. The term is used appropriately in reference to St. John, and inappropriately to Muhammad on the same page. Nor is this all. The word ‘evangelist’ is used on the same page in reference to Muhammad in translation of surah xxxiv, 27: ‘as an evangelist to all men’ ….
It may be considered ungracious to end on a critical note. But the purpose of this critique is to be as honestly critical as the importance of the subject demands. The above discussion speaks for itself. The specialist will no doubt make his own assessment; but to the general reader, and in particular the student of comparative religion, a word of warning is absolutely essential. As it stands, Professor Guillaume’s translation cannot be accepted as a reliable reproduction of the received Arabic text of the Sira.
— Tibawi, A. L., Arabic and Islamic Themes: Historical, Educational and Literacy Studies, (London: Luzac, 1976) 25-52
Published : June 7, 2016